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Seasons In Time

Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "No Stopping Spring "
Poems about the different seasons.

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Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very well written personification of winter and its hold on itself so the spring is delayed. I enjoyed reading it. It reads very well when it is read aloud. Have a wonderful day and God bless. Patricia .This is a very well written personification of winter and it's hold on itself so the spring is delayed. I enjoyed reading it. It reads very well when it is read aloud. Have a wonderful day and God bless. Patricia .

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
    Thank you. I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment on it.
Comment from Kristen Rose Ulrich
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That's a nice story of how spring prevailed! I loved your rhyme scheme and word choices. Sometimes it feels that winter is staying too long, but spring always wins. (At least that's how I feel, I live in New York.) Good job!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
    Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words. I appreciate your taking the time to read it. I live in the Texas panhandle. Sometimes here it seems that winter doesn't want to go away.
reply by Kristen Rose Ulrich on 24-Apr-2024
    You're welcome!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
    Appreciate your review.