2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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8 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
My phone contacted me a few minutes ago that tonight there will be a pink moon rising tonight. I can't wait to see it. I'm sure it will be as beautiful as your poem. Thank you for this amazing presentation.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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My phone contacted me a few minutes ago that tonight there will be a pink moon rising tonight. I can't wait to see it. I'm sure it will be as beautiful as your poem. Thank you for this amazing presentation.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
love alliteration - blushing behind beauty as pink peeks (or peaks lol)
great imagery blooming throughout a smooth flow -
love that second pic with the falling petals -
a great 575 poem!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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love alliteration - blushing behind beauty as pink peeks (or peaks lol)
great imagery blooming throughout a smooth flow -
love that second pic with the falling petals -
a great 575 poem!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
Terrific artwork for this post Gypsy! Your color scheme just adds to its overall presentation value.
Not quite sure if your peek-a-boo (sic) is meant as a verb in your construction of your 5-7-5 poem. If it is, an 's' is likely needed to agree with the noun 'moon.'
Mark
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Terrific artwork for this post Gypsy! Your color scheme just adds to its overall presentation value.
Not quite sure if your peek-a-boo (sic) is meant as a verb in your construction of your 5-7-5 poem. If it is, an 's' is likely needed to agree with the noun 'moon.'
Mark
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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The plural of peekaboo is also peekaboo.
Thank you, Mark
Comment from RJ Heritage
I have seen a reddish moon and it was beautiful. I can only imagine how amazing a pink moon must look.
Beautiful words that were captured in pretty display.
Thanks for sharing. Have a wonderful day.
God bless,
RJ
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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I have seen a reddish moon and it was beautiful. I can only imagine how amazing a pink moon must look.
Beautiful words that were captured in pretty display.
Thanks for sharing. Have a wonderful day.
God bless,
RJ
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
This poem had such an air of innocence. Using the term peek a boo made it feel like a child's game. Then the title with blushing reiterated the innocence. A beautifully written poem that made me smile. Gretchen
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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This poem had such an air of innocence. Using the term peek a boo made it feel like a child's game. Then the title with blushing reiterated the innocence. A beautifully written poem that made me smile. Gretchen
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I like your personification of the moon! It's still April and though the moon doesn't look pink nor is it full yet, it's good to know the name for the lovely April moon!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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I like your personification of the moon! It's still April and though the moon doesn't look pink nor is it full yet, it's good to know the name for the lovely April moon!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I'm happy you like it.
Love
Marival
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Wow, I never hear of you doing strictly a 5/7/5. However, it doesn't really matter because it is as lovely as any that you do. First of all your presentation never suffers no matter what kind of poem it is. The tree was gorgeous and then the sprinkling of petals coming down made it absolutely breath taking.
Your poem as always was spot on in such a Gypsy style. Love the words describing the pink moon playing peek a boo and the beauty of the tree from that grand blushing lit up ball.
Thank you for this gorgeous poem and for never disappointing. Love, Debi
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Wow, I never hear of you doing strictly a 5/7/5. However, it doesn't really matter because it is as lovely as any that you do. First of all your presentation never suffers no matter what kind of poem it is. The tree was gorgeous and then the sprinkling of petals coming down made it absolutely breath taking.
Your poem as always was spot on in such a Gypsy style. Love the words describing the pink moon playing peek a boo and the beauty of the tree from that grand blushing lit up ball.
Thank you for this gorgeous poem and for never disappointing. Love, Debi
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Debi.
Love
Marival
Comment from nancyjam
Your lovely 5-7-5 creates a beautiful vision of the moon in the readers mind. A shy Blushing moon hiding behind a tree. Beautiful! It's magical what a few well chosen words can create. Nicely done. Nancy
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Your lovely 5-7-5 creates a beautiful vision of the moon in the readers mind. A shy Blushing moon hiding behind a tree. Beautiful! It's magical what a few well chosen words can create. Nicely done. Nancy
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Nancy
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