Love is in the Air
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "My Shepherd"Love poems and sweet nothings
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Comment from Carol Clark2
I like your triolet. It's straightforward, but has a great message for the reader. The repeated line, My Shepherd watches over me, drives that message home in a gentle way. May He continue to bless you and keep you close. Carol
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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I like your triolet. It's straightforward, but has a great message for the reader. The repeated line, My Shepherd watches over me, drives that message home in a gentle way. May He continue to bless you and keep you close. Carol
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Sending thanks and blessings to you today.
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your triolet which is like a refrain of Psalm 23. We are blessed to have such a Good Shepherd. He loves and cares for us. I learned on Sunday that the Middle Eastern walled sheep pen has an opening. The shepherd lies in the gap. That's why Jesus is the Door!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Great job with your triolet which is like a refrain of Psalm 23. We are blessed to have such a Good Shepherd. He loves and cares for us. I learned on Sunday that the Middle Eastern walled sheep pen has an opening. The shepherd lies in the gap. That's why Jesus is the Door!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thanks for sharing about the Middle Eastern tradition of walled sheep pens. A reason for everything.
Comment from Sally Law
Loving this, Ginda dear, as I'm drawing close to my Lord during this time of trouble. He is my good Shepherd. Beautiful poem of our Lord. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal xoxo's
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Loving this, Ginda dear, as I'm drawing close to my Lord during this time of trouble. He is my good Shepherd. Beautiful poem of our Lord. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal xoxo's
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thanks for your kind thoughts. Sending back to you for blessings today.
Comment from RJ Heritage
Very well written in your chosen format. The words are inspirational and calming. It is a great way to start your day.
It is also a wonderful feeling when you are assured that The Fine and Good Shepard is watching over you.
RJ
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Very well written in your chosen format. The words are inspirational and calming. It is a great way to start your day.
It is also a wonderful feeling when you are assured that The Fine and Good Shepard is watching over you.
RJ
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Yes, indeed! Thanks for reviewing.
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You?re welcome
Comment from zanni
I love the gentleness in the poem as well as how the feeling of trust is communicated through the verse. The repetition is effective as is the rhyming scheme.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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I love the gentleness in the poem as well as how the feeling of trust is communicated through the verse. The repetition is effective as is the rhyming scheme.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thanks for your gentle thoughts today.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Ginda,
This is a well done triolet for which you chose the perfect artwork for illustration. It evokes the feeling of Jesus watching over us.
I commend you for taking up the 30 poems in 30 days prompt
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day,
Joan
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Hi Ginda,
This is a well done triolet for which you chose the perfect artwork for illustration. It evokes the feeling of Jesus watching over us.
I commend you for taking up the 30 poems in 30 days prompt
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day,
Joan
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your review and encouragement.
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No problem, Ginda.
Joan
