My Worst Fear
This is about my worst fear in life.2 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
In the last paragraph, you omitted the word (me) What they need from (me). This is a nicely written entry for the contest and your first post on FanStory. I wish you good luck.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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In the last paragraph, you omitted the word (me) What they need from (me). This is a nicely written entry for the contest and your first post on FanStory. I wish you good luck.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you for reading my short, and thank you for recommending the corrections for me to make. I sincerely appreciate it.
Comment from Sanku
Welcome to fanstory. You don't have to worry about disappointing someone. When you help you do your best. There are some grammatical issues here .I am sure you can edit them ..
First sentence,'My worst fear in life...
second para ,first line....."pleasure out of being needed..'
all the best.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Welcome to fanstory. You don't have to worry about disappointing someone. When you help you do your best. There are some grammatical issues here .I am sure you can edit them ..
First sentence,'My worst fear in life...
second para ,first line....."pleasure out of being needed..'
all the best.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for reading my story and for positively critiquing my work. I sincerely appreciate your time and suggestions.