Refreshed
Showers clean and refresh the earth.2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was a great poem in just six words. Your got the word count correct, and your last line was a great payoff. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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This was a great poem in just six words. Your got the word count correct, and your last line was a great payoff. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback.
Comment from Mark Jackson
Six words it may be poetry but is it poetic? I am on holiday and the rain does not feel refreshing even when I sit in the hot tub with a beer. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Six words it may be poetry but is it poetic? I am on holiday and the rain does not feel refreshing even when I sit in the hot tub with a beer. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Wait until you get out of the hot tub then the rain will cool and refresh, I bet. Thanks for read, I like a nice rain, especially good for the garden and the flowers perk up. Thanks for the read and response.
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I know you where talking about the garden I was being purposely obtuse. Sorry, I can be a grump.lol
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Me too.
