Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

You built the anticipation of the answer wonderfully in this poem. I was afraid of the answer. I am positive this young man was too. LOL Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation with us.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024

I had four marriages and none of them proposed. I guess it was my low self-esteem and my untreated bipolar disease. Now that I am older and have proper treatment, I don't think I will marry again. That is why I like your books' heroines, they have self-respect and don't settle for less than they deserve.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy hugs

reply by barbara.wilkey on 23-Apr-2024

We should never settle for less.

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Well, the three syllables per line were met and the presentation itself is quite stunning. I really like the colors you used to emphasize the different feelings that tge two experienced.
Thanks for posting.
RJ

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

reply by RJ Heritage on 22-Apr-2024

You're welcome

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

very cool proposal story poem
with the perfect hope-filled last line
great imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs