Breezy
Natural sounds.3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
These six words almost sound like a haiku. It uses personification and metaphor well to show the effect of ocean sounds on your heart.
Keep writing and stay healthy,
Good luck in the contest.
Have a nice rest of the week.
Joan
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Hi
These six words almost sound like a haiku. It uses personification and metaphor well to show the effect of ocean sounds on your heart.
Keep writing and stay healthy,
Good luck in the contest.
Have a nice rest of the week.
Joan
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for a wonderful review.
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You are most kindly welcome.
Joan
Comment from zanya
Yes it's amazing the sound of the sea and the waves crashing and that unmistakeable impact = sounds from the natural world that can bring us peace and tranquillity
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Yes it's amazing the sound of the sea and the waves crashing and that unmistakeable impact = sounds from the natural world that can bring us peace and tranquillity
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thank you for reading and the great review.
Comment from jessizero
This was a lovely piece of poetry in just six words! I like that you refer to the crashing waves as "nature's music." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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This was a lovely piece of poetry in just six words! I like that you refer to the crashing waves as "nature's music." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Deeply appreciated.
