Comment from
rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
about our recent solar eclipse, and the impact of it's beauty and majesty.
Imagine what it must has been like centuries ago when they had no understanding of what was happening.
I like the presentation that emulates the eclipse.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
Comment from
jessizero
I wonder if you mean the beauty of the blocked sun or of the blackness. Either way, this is a great poem, and you got the syllable count right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024