Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Terry and Buddy Stang"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
2 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written chapter in your book and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It moves along at a nice steady pace. When is read aloud? It also reads very well. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a good weekend. Patricia.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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This is a very well written chapter in your book and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It moves along at a nice steady pace. When is read aloud? It also reads very well. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a good weekend. Patricia.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your input and support. It means so much. I hope you continue reading
Comment from FurryBunny
The chapter is written in a suspenseful and engaging manner, with realistic dialogue and detailed descriptions that immerse the reader in the story. However, some dialogue feels cliché, transitions between scenes could be smoother, and character emotions could be further explored for deeper development.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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The chapter is written in a suspenseful and engaging manner, with realistic dialogue and detailed descriptions that immerse the reader in the story. However, some dialogue feels cliché, transitions between scenes could be smoother, and character emotions could be further explored for deeper development.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your feedback. All your advice and critiques are very impending to me. Keri reading