Randy Cat
a limerick10 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I always enjoy a good limerick, and this was definitely a good one. It gave me a chuckle. You seem to have met all the requirements for the contest. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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I always enjoy a good limerick, and this was definitely a good one. It gave me a chuckle. You seem to have met all the requirements for the contest. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thank you. Jessizero. Came in third.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Although the distinctive metre is missing in this Limerick, I enjoyed the sentiment and with you luck with the contest, this is a fun poem, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Although the distinctive metre is missing in this Limerick, I enjoyed the sentiment and with you luck with the contest, this is a fun poem, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from RJ Heritage
This one is funny and catchy. It moves along very cleverly. The colors are bold just like the cat that tge words describe.
Good luck.in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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This one is funny and catchy. It moves along very cleverly. The colors are bold just like the cat that tge words describe.
Good luck.in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you, RJ
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You're welcome
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Well, now that's certainly not your everyday limerick... :) ;) A wonderful entry to this fun contest -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you!! :)
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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LOL! Well, now that's certainly not your everyday limerick... :) ;) A wonderful entry to this fun contest -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you!! :)
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Yvette
Comment from lyenochka
With some topics, unless it's spelled out, it just goes over my head. But I hope Randy enjoys his hat dance with Candy. I can't get the picture of a cat construction worker laying pipe out of my head. But your limerick works. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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With some topics, unless it's spelled out, it just goes over my head. But I hope Randy enjoys his hat dance with Candy. I can't get the picture of a cat construction worker laying pipe out of my head. But your limerick works. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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I'm out of the contest. The hat angle wasn't according to instructions.
Comment from FurryBunny
This light-hearted poem is amusing and entertaining, although it could improve by having a more defined focus or theme. The humor and playful language make it a delightful choice for fans of whimsical poetry.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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This light-hearted poem is amusing and entertaining, although it could improve by having a more defined focus or theme. The humor and playful language make it a delightful choice for fans of whimsical poetry.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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The theme of the limerick is feline debauchery. : )
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is a very cute limerick about a cat who lost his hat but it didn't affect his studliness with the ladies. Lol. Nicely done. Review and stars fixed
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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This is a very cute limerick about a cat who lost his hat but it didn't affect his studliness with the ladies. Lol. Nicely done. Review and stars fixed
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Added a lost hat : )
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
He is a randy tomcat alright! First Brandy, then moving on to Candy! Like the suggestive meow-meow and your limerick has just the right amount of smut to pass the test! Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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He is a randy tomcat alright! First Brandy, then moving on to Candy! Like the suggestive meow-meow and your limerick has just the right amount of smut to pass the test! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Debbie
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet,
this is a cool poem , yes Randy is one hell of a cat and is successful with lasses.
That said ...
I presume you only read the front page of the contest . You need to open and read the requirements:
A cat who has lost its hat
Best of luck!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Ciao mystery poet,
this is a cool poem , yes Randy is one hell of a cat and is successful with lasses.
That said ...
I presume you only read the front page of the contest . You need to open and read the requirements:
A cat who has lost its hat
Best of luck!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Well, that's a problem. Thanks for the hats up, T.
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I felt bad breaking the news cause it?s obvious you put time and thought into your cool poem .. but at least you have ample time to edit.😕
Take care !🍀
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Which I did, and I think it's better. Thank you!
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I have changed it. Thank you.
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I googled to see what laying pipe meant .. oh my in slang it means having sex 🤣
Yes this version is raunchy indeed! 🐾
An excellent edit and in such a short time! 😐
Kudos !
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PS for those like me that are not English , I would suggest to mention in the note section what laying pipe means .. I?m curious and googled but many won?t
Ciao !
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Ciao! You now have 5 vote!
Best of luck🍀
Comment from royowen
Whe I was young, I was someone's accused of being a bit of a tomcat, but of course they were merely rumours, I was only being kind, a beautifully written post my friend, this is most rhythmic, well rhymed and written in.the manner of a limerick, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Whe I was young, I was someone's accused of being a bit of a tomcat, but of course they were merely rumours, I was only being kind, a beautifully written post my friend, this is most rhythmic, well rhymed and written in.the manner of a limerick, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Roy
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Most welcome