I've Looked Everywhere, Man
Of searchin' I've had my share, man12 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
This is cute poem. It would wear you out to try and make it match the song in length. There is nothing quite as aggrivating as trying to put a puzzle together and have that last piece missing. I've alwalys enjoyed the song.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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This is cute poem. It would wear you out to try and make it match the song in length. There is nothing quite as aggrivating as trying to put a puzzle together and have that last piece missing. I've alwalys enjoyed the song.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you.
Puzzle piece - you are correctamundo!
Song - I like hank Snow's the best.
Comment from Wendy G
lol. As soon as you pack the rest of the puzzle away, it will turn up. Have you checked out the contents of the vacuum cleaner? Have you got a dog who might have taken it away and eaten it? lol. I sense your extreme frustration. Well written poem.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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lol. As soon as you pack the rest of the puzzle away, it will turn up. Have you checked out the contents of the vacuum cleaner? Have you got a dog who might have taken it away and eaten it? lol. I sense your extreme frustration. Well written poem.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you.
It was fun. I wanted to exactly mimic the song, but wanted to rush to post.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I like Hanks snow's version better than Johnny Cash's as well. Before I got to the part of it explaining what it is, I was already humming the song.Enjoy the weekend. Karen
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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I like Hanks snow's version better than Johnny Cash's as well. Before I got to the part of it explaining what it is, I was already humming the song.Enjoy the weekend. Karen
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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smiley face here
Thank you. It was fun. I wanted to exactly mimic the song, but wanted to rush to post.
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Don't rush the good stuff. :-)
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a fun one mixing your poetic words with an old tune. Exaggerations are a part of many old country songs and you've got the rhythm right. Only change might be to keep tense right by using search(ed).
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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This is a fun one mixing your poetic words with an old tune. Exaggerations are a part of many old country songs and you've got the rhythm right. Only change might be to keep tense right by using search(ed).
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you. It was fun. I wanted to exactly mimic the song, but wanted to rush to post.
Comment from jim vecchio
I didn't even need the song. I got it! Truly enjoyed it, too! What a pain in the neck some things can be! I lost a tab from my old computer keyboard once. I looked everywhere. It never showed up, either. Maybe there's something cigar work like in the movie "The Time Machine" where Rod Taylor sends a cigar into the future.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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I didn't even need the song. I got it! Truly enjoyed it, too! What a pain in the neck some things can be! I lost a tab from my old computer keyboard once. I looked everywhere. It never showed up, either. Maybe there's something cigar work like in the movie "The Time Machine" where Rod Taylor sends a cigar into the future.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Hah!
Most frustrating is finding the piece long after the puzzle is gone.
Thank you for identifying in your very kind review.
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Thank you for writing!
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
So, this is what we're doing now, Wayne? I have The Long Black Veil inspired story ready for Sunday.
You had fun with this one, I can tell. There's always one piece to every puzzle that gets lost, and you don't realize it until the rest of the puzzle is put together. Look everywhere, but you won't find it. The vacuum will:-)
A fun read.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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So, this is what we're doing now, Wayne? I have The Long Black Veil inspired story ready for Sunday.
You had fun with this one, I can tell. There's always one piece to every puzzle that gets lost, and you don't realize it until the rest of the puzzle is put together. Look everywhere, but you won't find it. The vacuum will:-)
A fun read.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you.
It was a 'must' write.
I regret just a little that I didn't put in the time to exactly mimic the song.
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Do over:-)
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem/lyric, I've Looked Everywhere, Man, follows the basic concept as the search sends the puzzle piece seeker to everywhere that a puzzle piece will not be found.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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This poem/lyric, I've Looked Everywhere, Man, follows the basic concept as the search sends the puzzle piece seeker to everywhere that a puzzle piece will not be found.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you. I appreciate your very nice review.
Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed your fun poem and your repurposing the song for looking for a puzzle. I'm sure you've been in a LOT of places as you were doing your pet sitting job.
By the way, Johnny Cash wasn't the original Everywhere Man. It was "Australian country singer Geoff Mack in 1959 and made popular by Lucky Starr."
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Enjoyed your fun poem and your repurposing the song for looking for a puzzle. I'm sure you've been in a LOT of places as you were doing your pet sitting job.
By the way, Johnny Cash wasn't the original Everywhere Man. It was "Australian country singer Geoff Mack in 1959 and made popular by Lucky Starr."
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you. I wasn't aware of its first singer. Hank Snow was my favorite. And thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh my gosh, that's a cute Poem Wayne. I've never seen one on this subject before, but it begged to be done! Yes, the ode to the missing puzzle piece, lol. It always seems there's at least one.
Take care, and thanks for the smile,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Oh my gosh, that's a cute Poem Wayne. I've never seen one on this subject before, but it begged to be done! Yes, the ode to the missing puzzle piece, lol. It always seems there's at least one.
Take care, and thanks for the smile,
Rhonda
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank 'you' for the very nice review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Good ole Hank Snow "I'm Movin' On" comes to mind every time I hear his name, and I bet he had been about everywhere man, he had been every where. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Good ole Hank Snow "I'm Movin' On" comes to mind every time I hear his name, and I bet he had been about everywhere man, he had been every where. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thanks for the review.
