During an Evening Walk
What may happen during an evening.8 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet you now have 18 votes.
A well deserved position.
As I was read your awesome poem Van Gogh came to mind ( I love his work) so I wasn't surprised when I reached the end and read your notes.
You created the mood and made it look so easy despite you could only used words starting with S.
Kudos to you!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Ciao mystery poet you now have 18 votes.
A well deserved position.
As I was read your awesome poem Van Gogh came to mind ( I love his work) so I wasn't surprised when I reached the end and read your notes.
You created the mood and made it look so easy despite you could only used words starting with S.
Kudos to you!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide encouraging feedback. Appreciated.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wonderful use of the letter 's' as not just a letter, but more of soothing voice that walks through your dreamy vision... Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Wonderful use of the letter 's' as not just a letter, but more of soothing voice that walks through your dreamy vision... Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the encouraging review. Appreciated.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Wow, this must have taken forever to compose! No wonder there were so few contestants! I can't believe how evocatively you've captured the scene in the visual. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Wow, this must have taken forever to compose! No wonder there were so few contestants! I can't believe how evocatively you've captured the scene in the visual. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the encouraging review. Appreciated.
Comment from lyenochka
Wow, you met the challenge well with this exclusively S-word poem. I really liked "stars softly shed
Sowing silver seeds, streets shine"
You really brought van Gogh's painting to life!
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Wow, you met the challenge well with this exclusively S-word poem. I really liked "stars softly shed
Sowing silver seeds, streets shine"
You really brought van Gogh's painting to life!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the encouraging review. Appreciated.
Comment from EeanBlack
The line "Seeking starry-eyed sonata" stands out to me. A sonata is usually a composition for an individual soloist, but, sometimes accompanied by another artist. To collaborate on my own terms is my ideal, not my reality. Most beautiful!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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The line "Seeking starry-eyed sonata" stands out to me. A sonata is usually a composition for an individual soloist, but, sometimes accompanied by another artist. To collaborate on my own terms is my ideal, not my reality. Most beautiful!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and the feedback.
Comment from C.M. Brown
Love this poetic description of Van Gogh's "Starry Night". I felt like I was right in the picture. Great use of words starting with the letter 's'. Excellent job!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Love this poetic description of Van Gogh's "Starry Night". I felt like I was right in the picture. Great use of words starting with the letter 's'. Excellent job!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and the feedback.
Comment from jessizero
When I saw this prompt, I thought it was impossible. You have proven me wrong! You wrote a great poem with the required word count and using the same beginning letter. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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When I saw this prompt, I thought it was impossible. You have proven me wrong! You wrote a great poem with the required word count and using the same beginning letter. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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When I first began, I too got frustrated and thought it was impossible. Then I looked up s words in an old dictionary which helped. Thanks again for the six stars.
Comment from Sally Law
I so admire you, mystery poet. How is the world did you do this? I'm in awe and will vote for this as soon as it hits the voting booth. Pure poetry in s alliteration.
Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious!
All my best,
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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I so admire you, mystery poet. How is the world did you do this? I'm in awe and will vote for this as soon as it hits the voting booth. Pure poetry in s alliteration.
Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious!
All my best,
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read for the feedback, and for the vote. I didn't of supercalifragilisticexpialidocious or I would have tried to fit it in.
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It took me so long time to spell that. L O L! Now you can use it. Rooting for ya!
Sal :))
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Thank you.