Black Cat
A limerick4 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A fun entry to this fun contest. I would say, perhaps, that your first line is a bit long/choppy and does not flow smoothly into/with the second... thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you!! :)
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
A fun entry to this fun contest. I would say, perhaps, that your first line is a bit long/choppy and does not flow smoothly into/with the second... thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you!! :)
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
With kind regards
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
A cute tale about a cat losing his hat which is true to the prompt.
'He can't wear it now
He's lost it somehow'
Makes him sound lovably clumsy.
I enjoyed reading this little poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
A cute tale about a cat losing his hat which is true to the prompt.
'He can't wear it now
He's lost it somehow'
Makes him sound lovably clumsy.
I enjoyed reading this little poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
With kind regards
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Although distinctive metre is missing from this Limerick, I did enjoy the contents of this poem and the rhymes and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
Although distinctive metre is missing from this Limerick, I did enjoy the contents of this poem and the rhymes and wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work
With kind regards
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Limerick writing prompt. I especially liked the use of the word habitat in this poem. Good choice. Thank you for sharing. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
An excellent entry for the Limerick writing prompt. I especially liked the use of the word habitat in this poem. Good choice. Thank you for sharing. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
With kind regards