A Love Story
A morning in August3 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Love can be so quirky and embarrassing sometimes, especially when it comes to the first time with a person, and making/taking the first step, a wonderful read about this emotion****kahpot
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Love can be so quirky and embarrassing sometimes, especially when it comes to the first time with a person, and making/taking the first step, a wonderful read about this emotion****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
Comment from Brandi Radaker
Sometimes your poem seemed to flow at times better than others. As a reader, you are able to picture the scenes of the story that is unfolding. It's a light hearted version of love. Best wishes.
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Sometimes your poem seemed to flow at times better than others. As a reader, you are able to picture the scenes of the story that is unfolding. It's a light hearted version of love. Best wishes.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
Comment from Nicki Nance
A fun take on an emotional rescue. You captured 'awkward' in your imagery. The quick shifts from reckless abandon to social discomfort is quite a ride.
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A fun take on an emotional rescue. You captured 'awkward' in your imagery. The quick shifts from reckless abandon to social discomfort is quite a ride.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
