Sweet Memories
Fun times with my grandkids6 total reviews
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
Brenda, this is such a a warm, loving poem! I never wanted nor had children. But I sure do appreciate parents and grandparents and the valuable roles they play! It's said family is the microcosm of society. I'm glad people like you are out there helping to shape the young'uns! Maddy
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Brenda, this is such a a warm, loving poem! I never wanted nor had children. But I sure do appreciate parents and grandparents and the valuable roles they play! It's said family is the microcosm of society. I'm glad people like you are out there helping to shape the young'uns! Maddy
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Hi Maddie. Thank you for your nice review.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This sounds fun, Brenda, but I am not sure what the emotion is that you are trying to display. Is it sadness or regret? It surely can't be whining because I don't believe whining is an emotion. I love the picture it shows two young children having fun at the pool. Enjoy them while you can.
Jesse
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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This sounds fun, Brenda, but I am not sure what the emotion is that you are trying to display. Is it sadness or regret? It surely can't be whining because I don't believe whining is an emotion. I love the picture it shows two young children having fun at the pool. Enjoy them while you can.
Jesse
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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The emotion I'm showing is joy. The joy I felt spending summers with them. Thank you for your nice review.
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I would mention joy in your poem. Just a suggestion.
Jesse
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It's in the beginning
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I'm Sorry I missed that.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Your poem is full of emotions. You use descriptive words and emotions are displayed through your well-chosen words. The photo image matches perfectly and is adorable. I enjoyed reading your work. Best wishes.
Alex
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Your poem is full of emotions. You use descriptive words and emotions are displayed through your well-chosen words. The photo image matches perfectly and is adorable. I enjoyed reading your work. Best wishes.
Alex
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your nice review
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
It all kinda rhymes. If you say it is free verse you will score better. I am all for free verse myself because it requires no rules to flub you up. I find that immensely helpful somedays. :-) Karen
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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It all kinda rhymes. If you say it is free verse you will score better. I am all for free verse myself because it requires no rules to flub you up. I find that immensely helpful somedays. :-) Karen
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your review. Free verse is easier to write.
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This is the message I got from marilyn: came home tonight but am nervous about it. I had 3 small strokes and need to have my carotid arteries surgically cleaned. Still having trouble walking. Let's all continue the good thoughts on her behalf. Karen
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I like all the styles , but there are soooo many! :-)
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Thank you .
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Emotions Poetry Contest. Very cute poem by a grandma who sounds like she is missing the small version of her grandchildren. Thank goodness for memories! Adorable poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the Emotions Poetry Contest. Very cute poem by a grandma who sounds like she is missing the small version of her grandchildren. Thank goodness for memories! Adorable poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your kind review
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like your Grandchildren keep you busy here and they are challenging when they question everything! A fun post, much enjoyed Brenda, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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It sounds like your Grandchildren keep you busy here and they are challenging when they question everything! A fun post, much enjoyed Brenda, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Well, they are grown up now. I miss the time with them. Thank you for the nice review
