Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Your Senryu offers great advice offered through metaphorical language. Very effective!
You have misspelled 'tongue'
Best of luck in the contest.
Julie
:-)

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024

I always seem to misspell that word haha! Thank you very much for the review and have a great rest of your day! :)

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Good

A wonderful feeling behind your words here... did you mean 'tongue' and not 'tounge"... also, the period serves no purpose as it is obviously the end of the poem. Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024

Thank you so much for the review and for pointing both of those things out! I just fixed it :)