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-Strides With Love-

Spiritual Romance

3 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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Accepting the impression which wafts over this collection of sweet-smelling word salads, one must also receive, with a toothy grin, the absence of content.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Thats ok. Merit shall remain poised due to personal experience of silence capturing the dawn.
Comment from C.M. Brown
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Absolutely beautiful! The words feel so tender and dear, I really enjoyed reading this. I like the last stanza talking about the path. This reminded of the narrow road or path Jesus spoke about at Matthew 7:14. Great job!

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Thank you for such praise and comparativety with the bible, i hope to glint another poem in His honor. Have s blesy day.
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
Excellent
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I found this to be an extremely soothing and poignant poem.
The end lines are lovely...

'Uplift and cherish the path trodden upon as the straight and narrow, for grace will surely follow suit and reveal the secrets of tending eagerly to the spirit found within her pulsing heart.'

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Thank you, may you stay blest.