Busy, Busy, Busy Bee
Busy Bee ws written for my niece Jessica whe she was 3 yrs o7 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was such a sweet and lovely poem for your (then) three-year-old niece. I love the repetition of "busy, busy, busy bee," and I enjoyed your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This was such a sweet and lovely poem for your (then) three-year-old niece. I love the repetition of "busy, busy, busy bee," and I enjoyed your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm sure your niece loved this, Michael! The repeating words of 'busy, busy, busy, bees,' is a great way for a child to recognise them in other stories and poems. It's nice to read other poets who write for children as well as grown-ups. This is another lovely contest entry. Well done, my friend, and Good Luck! Sandra
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I'm sure your niece loved this, Michael! The repeating words of 'busy, busy, busy, bees,' is a great way for a child to recognise them in other stories and poems. It's nice to read other poets who write for children as well as grown-ups. This is another lovely contest entry. Well done, my friend, and Good Luck! Sandra
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Poem for a Child contest. This is a very cute poem for small children. Easy to read and understand. Good luck in the contest.
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An excellent entry for the Poem for a Child contest. This is a very cute poem for small children. Easy to read and understand. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
Comment from tfawcus
I can imagine reading this to a young child and getting a terrific response to that repeating line at the start of each verse. I know my grandchildren would have enjoyed it.
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I can imagine reading this to a young child and getting a terrific response to that repeating line at the start of each verse. I know my grandchildren would have enjoyed it.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
Comment from Douglas Goff
Nicely done. This has a great rhyming pattern that does not seem forced or 'plugged' in.
I think that kids would really enjoy this. It is a fun read and actually fun to say.
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Nicely done. This has a great rhyming pattern that does not seem forced or 'plugged' in.
I think that kids would really enjoy this. It is a fun read and actually fun to say.
D
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
Comment from kahpot
What a lovely read, it flows so very well, and there is a message for the little ones, as they discover how and where their honey comes from, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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What a lovely read, it flows so very well, and there is a message for the little ones, as they discover how and where their honey comes from, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
Comment from Wojciech Gurak
It is a fun and joyful poetry piece. Your niece must have loved it. I enjoyed it very much as well. Wish you good luck with your Children's Poetry contest.
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It is a fun and joyful poetry piece. Your niece must have loved it. I enjoyed it very much as well. Wish you good luck with your Children's Poetry contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
