Busy, Busy, Busy Bee
Busy Bee ws written for my niece Jessica whe she was 3 yrs o8 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Children would enjoy reading this poem with the repeating words and the rhymes and near rhymes. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
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Children would enjoy reading this poem with the repeating words and the rhymes and near rhymes. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2024
Comment from jessizero
This was such a sweet and lovely poem for your (then) three-year-old niece. I love the repetition of "busy, busy, busy bee," and I enjoyed your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This was such a sweet and lovely poem for your (then) three-year-old niece. I love the repetition of "busy, busy, busy bee," and I enjoyed your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm sure your niece loved this, Michael! The repeating words of 'busy, busy, busy, bees,' is a great way for a child to recognise them in other stories and poems. It's nice to read other poets who write for children as well as grown-ups. This is another lovely contest entry. Well done, my friend, and Good Luck! Sandra
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I'm sure your niece loved this, Michael! The repeating words of 'busy, busy, busy, bees,' is a great way for a child to recognise them in other stories and poems. It's nice to read other poets who write for children as well as grown-ups. This is another lovely contest entry. Well done, my friend, and Good Luck! Sandra
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Poem for a Child contest. This is a very cute poem for small children. Easy to read and understand. Good luck in the contest.
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An excellent entry for the Poem for a Child contest. This is a very cute poem for small children. Easy to read and understand. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
Comment from tfawcus
I can imagine reading this to a young child and getting a terrific response to that repeating line at the start of each verse. I know my grandchildren would have enjoyed it.
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I can imagine reading this to a young child and getting a terrific response to that repeating line at the start of each verse. I know my grandchildren would have enjoyed it.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
Comment from Douglas Goff
Nicely done. This has a great rhyming pattern that does not seem forced or 'plugged' in.
I think that kids would really enjoy this. It is a fun read and actually fun to say.
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Nicely done. This has a great rhyming pattern that does not seem forced or 'plugged' in.
I think that kids would really enjoy this. It is a fun read and actually fun to say.
D
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
Comment from kahpot
What a lovely read, it flows so very well, and there is a message for the little ones, as they discover how and where their honey comes from, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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What a lovely read, it flows so very well, and there is a message for the little ones, as they discover how and where their honey comes from, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
Comment from Wojciech Gurak
It is a fun and joyful poetry piece. Your niece must have loved it. I enjoyed it very much as well. Wish you good luck with your Children's Poetry contest.
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It is a fun and joyful poetry piece. Your niece must have loved it. I enjoyed it very much as well. Wish you good luck with your Children's Poetry contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024