A Ray of Hope
The way this man makes me feel.5 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is really good, Michael. That someone can walk into another's life and lift you up and bring back the sunshine, is a friend worth keeping. This man obviously did this for you, and I'm so happy for you. It's also an excellent contest entry, and I wish you the very best of luck! Warmest hug, Sandra xx
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This is really good, Michael. That someone can walk into another's life and lift you up and bring back the sunshine, is a friend worth keeping. This man obviously did this for you, and I'm so happy for you. It's also an excellent contest entry, and I wish you the very best of luck! Warmest hug, Sandra xx
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
Comment from Mark Jackson
Is this a poem about a man or is it a poem about how a man makes you feel? If you are a man and it is about you is it about a man anyway? These are the questions that rattle around my head. I would say it is an innovative approach to the competition I did enjoy reading it, thanks for sharing and good luck.
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Is this a poem about a man or is it a poem about how a man makes you feel? If you are a man and it is about you is it about a man anyway? These are the questions that rattle around my head. I would say it is an innovative approach to the competition I did enjoy reading it, thanks for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When someone walks into our life and brings a ray of sunshine with them, then we feel uplifted and everything changes in life, a fine post Michael, love Dolly x x x
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When someone walks into our life and brings a ray of sunshine with them, then we feel uplifted and everything changes in life, a fine post Michael, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
Comment from Douglas Goff
What an interesting exchange of intertwining ideas!
Very good read. It leads to more questions than it actually answers, but that is good poetry.
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What an interesting exchange of intertwining ideas!
Very good read. It leads to more questions than it actually answers, but that is good poetry.
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
Comment from Barry Penfold
To me a calming poem overall. A tribute to a man who obviously kept you wanting to live. Nice effort and thanks for sharing. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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To me a calming poem overall. A tribute to a man who obviously kept you wanting to live. Nice effort and thanks for sharing. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024