2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It's hard when a girl has her first period. I had boys so it wasn't the same, but many of my friends had daughters. I enjoyed the metaphor and thank you for sharing this presentation with us.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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It's hard when a girl has her first period. I had boys so it wasn't the same, but many of my friends had daughters. I enjoyed the metaphor and thank you for sharing this presentation with us.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I'm wondering if the "first moon" refers to the first menstrual period? I would think the girl would suddenly see "blood" in everything even in the sunset. Ah, the pain of growing up!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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I'm wondering if the "first moon" refers to the first menstrual period? I would think the girl would suddenly see "blood" in everything even in the sunset. Ah, the pain of growing up!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Yes, first moon is her first period. To me first moon sounds better. Should I add a note in my a.n.?
Native American women call their periods moons. I love that.
I had a bad experience with mine and my dad...not a good memory.
Thank you very much, big sis.
Love,
Marival
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Sorry! That's when you needed your mom. I hope your sister helped you.
I didn't learn until as afterwards and my mom explained it all in medical terms. 😂
Comment from kahpot
A very thought provoking read, the image your words paint of a girl becoming a woman are so very delicate and very well describe, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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A very thought provoking read, the image your words paint of a girl becoming a woman are so very delicate and very well describe, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, kym. Have a great night.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
oooh interesting and thought-provoking comparison!
smooth flow... perfect pic and colours!
excellent haiku!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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oooh interesting and thought-provoking comparison!
smooth flow... perfect pic and colours!
excellent haiku!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Seems to be a coming of age of a young girl into womanhood.
Expressed very well by colors and words.
Thank for sharing your work.
Have a great night.
RJ
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Seems to be a coming of age of a young girl into womanhood.
Expressed very well by colors and words.
Thank for sharing your work.
Have a great night.
RJ
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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thank you very much, RJ (*-*)
gypsy hugs
Comment from Janet Foor
Oh my! This raises the bar on JSF poetry. The powerful imagery that takes the reader beyond the words on the page to memories and realizations of the past.
I am in awe of the poets talent to touch the reader on many levels.
Excellent artwork and presentation. The notes were very helpful as well.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Oh my! This raises the bar on JSF poetry. The powerful imagery that takes the reader beyond the words on the page to memories and realizations of the past.
I am in awe of the poets talent to touch the reader on many levels.
Excellent artwork and presentation. The notes were very helpful as well.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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thank you very much, Janet. I really appreciate your exceptional review and kind words. (*-*)
gypsy hugs