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"The Gift of Life 2003"

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Comment from Douglas Goff
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Strong, Doc. Real strong. It does feel like God just sits back and watches sometimes. I feel like this earth of ours is just one giant proving ground where we are supposed to learn something.

Maybe like ants scurrying about. Not sure. Never sure. I gave it a sixer as you developed a high level of stress in just a short piece.
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 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Thanks Douglas.
    And, Earth's slowly dieing in masses of Disease and pollution called, "Human Beings" "
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Again, thank you for sharing this post with us. I enjoyed reading.

I'm blind the Sun's no shine? (don't shine, & not sure why there's a question mark)

Watching You Watching but for some reason the bloods still flowing? (why the question mark, it's not a question)

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
    Thanks Barbara.
    The questions are for the reviewer to wonder in order to strengthen my perceptions.
    Along with my irradic style.
    Doctor Ricky