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Love Struck and Besotted

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Comment from Ginda Simpson
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You have a beautiful daughter and this is an excellent photo to illustrate your Naani poem. It is just simply sweet as love should be and was a pleasure to read.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
    I am glad you enjoyed it
    Pls come often and visit
Comment from Wojciech Gurak
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Love theme poem is so universally relatable. Good job. Would the poem be better if at the end you changed line from "as much as today" to "even more than today"?

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
    I suspect it depends on who and how it is read, but it flowed from my thoughts as easily as a leaf falls from a tree. Thanks for the suggestion, and welcome to my rabbit hole.
Comment from Wendy G
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A great celebration of enduring love - may it be so! Lovely image and poem thoughftfully composed in Naani format. Very nicely done tribute to the timelessness of love. Best wishes.
Wendy

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
    As always, you continue to be kind and thoughtful.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Much exuberance here in the visual and in this expression of love in your naani verse. I love the way the verse flows uninterrupted as though the love could go on forever. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Well, forever is a long time, and so is 45 years, but who's counting? I married up and have only looked forward since Jun '79. Thank you.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A beautiful adaptation of the naani form here... your repetition of 'today' in such a short form would otherwise be verboten, but it really works with your employment here! Thanx so much for sharing and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    I appreciate the well wishes and have my fingers crossed but?
    Thank you
Comment from Douglas Goff
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That is indeed a cute little Naani! You can never go wrong writing about love on Fanstory. We eat it up like tapioca pudding on dessert night at the end of age home! Yummy!!!!

Great tribute to that special someone. Keep up the good work!
D

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Thank you again
    To submit a double header (I have that short story, too) has been a long time coming. Maybe I have Covid or simply delirious naturally.
Comment from papa55mike
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Thank goodness that someone remembers Bambi. Those old Disney movies are classics. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    You are quite kind and I appreciate your read
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It gets right to the important point. The picture goes nicely with your words. It would be nice if most people would feel that way. Very good job.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    I think many people do feel a same but keep it a secret. 🤓
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Tom,
This is a quick and to the point poem about the feeling of lasting love. Is it usually said "I will love you more tomorrow than a do today", and not the same. Either way it is romantic. I like the fun photo.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a nice day.
Joan

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    No plagiarism on my part. It was an original thought... or a recollected thought from a previous life! Either way, I said it to my wife and she said you're a poet and too few know it. :-O
Comment from jessizero
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I think you got the syllable count right, and the poem was very sweet. I love the words you picked for your title and description! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
    Let me say uncategorically- you?re right.