Elevator
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Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your story. The ending was a surprise and funny. Your story is well written. Great job. Good luck in the contest. Welcome to Fanstory.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed reading your story. The ending was a surprise and funny. Your story is well written. Great job. Good luck in the contest. Welcome to Fanstory.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much. I?m glad I joined.
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations on your first milestone post! Your one hundred word flash fiction story was very cute and entertaining. I loved the way your character called for the elevator. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Congratulations on your first milestone post! Your one hundred word flash fiction story was very cute and entertaining. I loved the way your character called for the elevator. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from Bobby Jo
cute. my nephew once was told it was time to hit the road, he promptly walked outside, bent down and started to hit the road. It is a moment I'll never forget. Kids say and do the darnest things.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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cute. my nephew once was told it was time to hit the road, he promptly walked outside, bent down and started to hit the road. It is a moment I'll never forget. Kids say and do the darnest things.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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😂
Comment from Mia Twysted
I got a good little giggle there are the end. It is just like something my son would do or that I would do as well. This is a wonderful little story. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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I got a good little giggle there are the end. It is just like something my son would do or that I would do as well. This is a wonderful little story. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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I?m glad you liked it. Thank you for the kind words.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congrats on your first milestone and welcome on board! And what an intro to the site! This is a well expressed 100 word flash with a very realistic scenario (I wonder if it's true?) of a father taking his son into the office and then the son literally calling the lift. Sweet and humorous in equal measure! Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Congrats on your first milestone and welcome on board! And what an intro to the site! This is a well expressed 100 word flash with a very realistic scenario (I wonder if it's true?) of a father taking his son into the office and then the son literally calling the lift. Sweet and humorous in equal measure! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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I?m so glad I joined. Thank you for the review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, Elevator, has the proper word count, and finds the narrator following his dad's commands with alacrity and accuracy. One must also accept that the elevator failed to respond. Funny.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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This one-hundred-word story, Elevator, has the proper word count, and finds the narrator following his dad's commands with alacrity and accuracy. One must also accept that the elevator failed to respond. Funny.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Appreciate the review. I like writing stories with a bit of humour.
