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Fragments of Memory

24 syllable naani

6 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Love the written vision as well as the chosen artwork... Funny how those fragments can trigger both truth and perceived truth, yeah? Great entry and good luck in the contest!! ;)

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024

Comment from Bobby Jo
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oh, I feel this in my soul. Yes. and I am a scrapbook, journalist, photography junkie. I can resenate with this on many levels. Thanks for pointing out this.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024

Comment from Val Crisson
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So far, this is the only naani I have read that is fit to be in this contest. Love your "scrapbook" of life idea. This really holds true to the naani form. Hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024

Comment from RodG
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The Speaker gives us some sage advice about how to live and preserve our memories. Indeed, we should pass the stories on orally to future generations like the Native Americans do. Rod

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Naani Poem writing prompt. I enjoyed this poem, comparing life's memories to pages in a scrapbook. Creative comparison. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024

Comment from Mark Jackson
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I like this, it is a good picture that you form and a good entry to a competition as you know that all the voters are also scribblers. Good Luck and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024