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Peacemaker

Make peace

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Love the written message in your naani here... Social media has truly taken away the desire for peace, though, I'm afraid.... there must always be some conflict or such. Great entry and good luck in the contest!! ;)

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Thank you, hopefully I win!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Naani Poem writing prompt. The syllable count meets the criteria for this poem format. A lovely message written in this piece and one the world needs to hear right now. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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I liked reading this poem. It seems to come from the point of view of Jesus, or it is suggested as such. I like the 'p' alliteration going on with emphasized p words like peacemaker, people, peace, Please. Nice share.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.