Temporal Record Keeping
Permanent, no more!4 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Not a file cabinet up there, is there? :-) Love the written vision as well as the chosen artwork... Good thing He's a Father that will always listen to our singing! Great entry and good luck in the contest!! ;)
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Not a file cabinet up there, is there? :-) Love the written vision as well as the chosen artwork... Good thing He's a Father that will always listen to our singing! Great entry and good luck in the contest!! ;)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I hope that's true and wonder why He would condone the trespasses we accumulated by repeating the error of our ways repeatedly. The adage for me would be "fool me once, yourfault; twice would be my fault.
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I hope that's true and wonder why He would condone the trespasses we accumulated by repeating the error of our ways repeatedly. The adage for me would be "fool me once, yourfault; twice would be my fault.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Naani Poem writing prompt. The message given is slear and complete within the limited syllable count format. The picture goes along with the poem nicely. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the Naani Poem writing prompt. The message given is slear and complete within the limited syllable count format. The picture goes along with the poem nicely. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! When I write serious, funny wins, and when I write funny, serious wins. I'm curious to see what happens.
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I have had similar experiences. I've decided that unless the contest specifies a specific genre, i am going to write what i want and let the chips fall where they may. i write best when I like what i am writing about. :-)
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That's a great attitude! At least you get the experience of writing in a variety of manners!
Comment from Nicki Nance
Such a clever and candid Naani poem. I love that your graphic was earth bound. Sometimes that drives the point home more clearly than the more ethereal representations of spiritual concepts. Well done,
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Such a clever and candid Naani poem. I love that your graphic was earth bound. Sometimes that drives the point home more clearly than the more ethereal representations of spiritual concepts. Well done,
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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I'm very thankful for your kind words.