My Transformation
My Transformation from a night owl to a morning butterfly.6 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent story - one doesn't think of the complications of trying to switch back to a "normal" routine after so many years of being a night owl. Wll written. best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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An excellent story - one doesn't think of the complications of trying to switch back to a "normal" routine after so many years of being a night owl. Wll written. best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your story. It is well written and flowed easily. It was very interesting My son got a job where he works swing shift He is having a hard time on the night shift. Good luck in the contest
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I enjoyed reading your story. It is well written and flowed easily. It was very interesting My son got a job where he works swing shift He is having a hard time on the night shift. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
Comment from prettybluebirds
That is a challenging change. My husband and I got up at four am every day for years. I remember milking cows long before daylight. When we retired, it was still hard to sleep longer for years. Good luck in the contest.
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That is a challenging change. My husband and I got up at four am every day for years. I remember milking cows long before daylight. When we retired, it was still hard to sleep longer for years. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
Comment from Natureschild
This story beautifully depicts a journey of transformation from a night-worker to a daytime role. It celebrates the power of love and personal evolution.
There are a few areas where adjustment could enhance flow and clarity. For instance;
"I took a little time off for myself but when I did decide to begin looking for a new job I first took a long hard look at my husband,", it might be clearer to separate the actions to avoid confusion.
Consider something like: "I took a little time off for myself. When I did decide to begin looking for a new job, I first took a long hard look at my husband."
I enjoyed your journey and I hope you find this constructive. - Terry
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This story beautifully depicts a journey of transformation from a night-worker to a daytime role. It celebrates the power of love and personal evolution.
There are a few areas where adjustment could enhance flow and clarity. For instance;
"I took a little time off for myself but when I did decide to begin looking for a new job I first took a long hard look at my husband,", it might be clearer to separate the actions to avoid confusion.
Consider something like: "I took a little time off for myself. When I did decide to begin looking for a new job, I first took a long hard look at my husband."
I enjoyed your journey and I hope you find this constructive. - Terry
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story is incredibly moving and inspiring. I found it a testament to the strength of love and the willingness to adapt for the ones we care about. Transitioning from a night shift worker to a day shift worker can't be easy. Your determination shines through in every word. It's clear that your love for your husband. That was my favorite part of your writing.
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Your story is incredibly moving and inspiring. I found it a testament to the strength of love and the willingness to adapt for the ones we care about. Transitioning from a night shift worker to a day shift worker can't be easy. Your determination shines through in every word. It's clear that your love for your husband. That was my favorite part of your writing.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Rebirth Contest. This was very well written and interesting. I quit working the midnight shift after ten years and I have never fully recovered. My nights are spent mostly trying my best to sleep and not doing a good job of it. I hope it gets easier with time. Good luck in the contest.
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An excellent entry for the Rebirth Contest. This was very well written and interesting. I quit working the midnight shift after ten years and I have never fully recovered. My nights are spent mostly trying my best to sleep and not doing a good job of it. I hope it gets easier with time. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
