The Sun Gifts Life
A Haiku2 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. Nice visuals in the descriptive phrases and surprising rhyme in all three lines which is seldom seen in this kind of poem. good luck in the contest.
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. Nice visuals in the descriptive phrases and surprising rhyme in all three lines which is seldom seen in this kind of poem. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful and uplifting poem, as the seasons change, and what nature's beauty has to offer, I especially like "peaceful days" and hope this will come, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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What a wonderful and uplifting poem, as the seasons change, and what nature's beauty has to offer, I especially like "peaceful days" and hope this will come, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024