2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "The Bells Toll at Break of Day".
5 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem causes vivid imagery in the minds so your readers. Their creative imagination can run wild with each line, or word. Again, this is one of your best. You just get better and better.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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This poem causes vivid imagery in the minds so your readers. Their creative imagination can run wild with each line, or word. Again, this is one of your best. You just get better and better.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I like your suite of love couplets. My favorite was:
"the love poems I write for you
are braided with unwavering woe "
The "woe" is surprising because we think it would be "unwavering love" but since it ends that way, it seems clear that the relationship has ended.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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I like your suite of love couplets. My favorite was:
"the love poems I write for you
are braided with unwavering woe "
The "woe" is surprising because we think it would be "unwavering love" but since it ends that way, it seems clear that the relationship has ended.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you have a wonderful day.
Love
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
love these two lines!!
braided with unwavering woe
the morning is as cold as marble
great imagery in this
smooth flow of couplets
and cool pics
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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love these two lines!!
braided with unwavering woe
the morning is as cold as marble
great imagery in this
smooth flow of couplets
and cool pics
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
Very romantic and longing verses. It can be definitely from a man's point of view.
The words are tender and strong. The colors at least, I do associate with masculinity. Well written.
RJ
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Very romantic and longing verses. It can be definitely from a man's point of view.
The words are tender and strong. The colors at least, I do associate with masculinity. Well written.
RJ
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
I can imagine that if one is used to sleeping with someone and waking up with them, whether early or late it would be a shock to wake up with their absence. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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I can imagine that if one is used to sleeping with someone and waking up with them, whether early or late it would be a shock to wake up with their absence. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs