Reviews from
Yabba Dabba Doo!
2 total reviews
Comment from
kahpot
Ah! yes, those memorable days, I think many will relate to this wonderful short poem, you have written a very imaged work, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
Comment from
Bobby Jo
the point of catching her in the moment of lust, well this is short and a little hard to really comment on, but it was right to the point of the right timing in life.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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