The Game of Life
A 5-7-5 poem.3 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Wow now here are some pearls of real wisdom to ponder about life itself and enclosed in the very short format of the 5/7/5 and a superb visual to illustrate
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Wow now here are some pearls of real wisdom to ponder about life itself and enclosed in the very short format of the 5/7/5 and a superb visual to illustrate
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you. Your reviewing means such a great deal to me and I so very much appreciate the six stars.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. The premise of the poem states that basically life is a game and we are subject to it's rules just like any other game we play. I would submit that while this is true in many cases, in some cases the rules are self-imposed and we need to learn that rules were meant to be broken. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. The premise of the poem states that basically life is a game and we are subject to it's rules just like any other game we play. I would submit that while this is true in many cases, in some cases the rules are self-imposed and we need to learn that rules were meant to be broken. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you. I deeply appreciate your insight and review.
Comment from jessizero
How true this is! I have been reminded of this recently. You did a good job with the syllable count, and you expressed yourself well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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How true this is! I have been reminded of this recently. You did a good job with the syllable count, and you expressed yourself well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you. As always, your reviewing and comments mean a great deal to me.
