Cosmic neighborhood
5-7-5 poem3 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Isn't it wonderful when a poet turns his/her eyes skyward to remind us readers of the wonders and grandeur of the heavens and here is a prime example of that
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Isn't it wonderful when a poet turns his/her eyes skyward to remind us readers of the wonders and grandeur of the heavens and here is a prime example of that
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
about the cosmic neighborhood of stars and constellations.
Nice touch of alliteration. I like the lack of rhyme,
but repetition of the "y" ending five words.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
about the cosmic neighborhood of stars and constellations.
Nice touch of alliteration. I like the lack of rhyme,
but repetition of the "y" ending five words.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you dear Robert <3
Comment from RodG
You draw the reader's eyes to the nighttime sky where stars are easily seen. You make us focus on that cluster of stars known as the Milky Way and make us think about how and why they pulsate. Rod
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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You draw the reader's eyes to the nighttime sky where stars are easily seen. You make us focus on that cluster of stars known as the Milky Way and make us think about how and why they pulsate. Rod
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you dear Rod <3