The Rabbit Hole
Day to day mood management struggles of this writer.4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, The Rabbit Hole, has the proper word count and becomes the end all and be all of the young author's existence, as she becomes part of her system.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
This one-hundred-word story, The Rabbit Hole, has the proper word count and becomes the end all and be all of the young author's existence, as she becomes part of her system.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you Bill :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile and disappearing into mountains of paper sounds like he drowning of a potential novelist! A fun post and I enjoyed the sentiments, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
You made me smile and disappearing into mountains of paper sounds like he drowning of a potential novelist! A fun post and I enjoyed the sentiments, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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thank you, Dolly, much appreciated, glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from patcelaw
Sometimes in this world of disarray we all find that we have times that we feel like we're going down a rabbit hole. I wish you the very best with your writing and may you not have too many crumpled sheets of paper in your trash. Patricia .
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
Sometimes in this world of disarray we all find that we have times that we feel like we're going down a rabbit hole. I wish you the very best with your writing and may you not have too many crumpled sheets of paper in your trash. Patricia .
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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thanks, Patricia, much appreciated
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, I like this, it has a unique ending, and as it would have it, a rabbit hole appeared and someone seems to have been swallowed up, well dine, a great post, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
Heh heh, I like this, it has a unique ending, and as it would have it, a rabbit hole appeared and someone seems to have been swallowed up, well dine, a great post, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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I am glad this idea came to me for a 100-word flash fiction, I feel like if it was longer, a rabbit hole was likely :), thank you for the review.
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Well done