Reviews from

2024 Gypsy's Haiku

Viewing comments for Chapter 87 "Pink Moon"
x

8 total reviews 
Comment from LateBloomer
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with vivid imagery. I could envision the evening scene. Of special note:

neath a vail of blossom haze
(Nice)

Beautiful photo choice. The pink moon should be in the sky on April 24th. I'm looking forward to seeing it. Well done. Xo. M


 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A wonderful example of this form of haiku, for me this form of rules seems hard, though your words in this poem gives the reader a great idea of how it should be formatted, very well done, and thank you for sharing/showing us****kahpot

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    It's not hard, it's the same kind of haiku you write, you just need to identify the season.

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is one of your best presentations. If you lined them all up it would be very hard to choose one as the best, but this one would be up there in the order. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This poem was so picturesque. I love the flow to it. The color or pink so dominant, even the moon was a shade. Then the butterflies take to the skies, blending with the moon and swooping down to mix with the blossoming field. Gretchen

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind feedback. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

had me with the pink moon... and purple butterflies (my two fave colours lol)

a great haiku with cool imagery and pics!!

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind feedback. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Yes Gypsy, I favor this type of poetry writing above all others.

Your Haiku is clearly at the highest level of FS poets.

For this one, your verse combined with artwork and your coloring scheme make for a terrific overall presentation.

Mark

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind feedback. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is a pretty and easy Haiku to understand. I like the palette of the colors.The pause in your verse does not seem forced, but natural.
Thank you for sharing.
RJ

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Ooh! I really like the "veil of blossom haze". The sunset today was a kind of purple haze that spread across the sky. I see so much more of the sky here. Beautiful presentation as always!


 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    We are writing haiku kigo, a season word or phrase. Blossom haze represents early spring.

    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love,

    Marival