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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This poem and the presentation caused me to smile and nod my head. I'm positive those dainty little flowers did have to work really hard to push through the snow and the ground. Great job.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind feedback. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

cool imagery - the idea of a flower champion blooms of hope...
a great haiku with smooth flow and cool pics

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind feedback. Have a wonderful day. I appreciate the exceptional six stars rating

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
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I really like the subtleness of the Spring Haiku. Well, I am thinking that this is the time when the snow is melting quickly. Your words are cool and calming
Thanks for sharing your work.
RJ

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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I like your hinting of snowdrops are like champion boxers to push through the dirt. It's a very unique way to express the flower's desire to join the spring blooms.

Well done.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind feedback. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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Hooray for those strong snowdrops! They are like champions of any sport like boxing and other grueling physical events, in which the players have to overcome a lot. I love snowdrops but haven't planted those yet...

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister. I have never seen real snowdrops, only in pictures.

    Love

    Marival
reply by lyenochka on 14-Apr-2024
    You must see them in person as they have a wonderful scent. There was a field of them in my previous neighborhood. Every January or February they bloomed.