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Triumph In Battle

Free verse poem

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Comment from jessizero
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I love that you made this free verse poem in the shape of a raindrop. I like the way you likened rain to a battle. (Unless I'm misreading?) Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
    You are exactly right! This was about a rainstorm. Thank you for seeing that! I appreciate your review.
    :) R.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fine free verse. There are not winners in war, only losers and we cannot be triumphant, we can only mourn for the losses and be glad it is over, a poignant write, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
    Thank you for your review. :)