A Trip to Paterson
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What an intriguing and humorous piece of dialogue! I enjoyed this from the start. Humphrey's phobias became ever more extreme to the point that Chic seemingly gave up trying to be the sane one and lapse into some wonderful 'double entendre.' I was going to point out an error with the 'two-tired' but then I saw what you were doing and the others were simply magical, not least because you switched the tone so unexpectedly. This is my kind of wackiness and a joy to read. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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What an intriguing and humorous piece of dialogue! I enjoyed this from the start. Humphrey's phobias became ever more extreme to the point that Chic seemingly gave up trying to be the sane one and lapse into some wonderful 'double entendre.' I was going to point out an error with the 'two-tired' but then I saw what you were doing and the others were simply magical, not least because you switched the tone so unexpectedly. This is my kind of wackiness and a joy to read. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you! I tried to pattern this after a comic monologue that Bud and Lou might give.
Comment from RodG
What a delightful story--all dialog. You make us wonder if Humphrey and Chic will ever see the ghost. Wonderful characterization of Humphrey as the total neophyte and I love how Chic teases him. Rod
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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What a delightful story--all dialog. You make us wonder if Humphrey and Chic will ever see the ghost. Wonderful characterization of Humphrey as the total neophyte and I love how Chic teases him. Rod
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much! I fashioned them after Abbott and Costello.
