Striding Edge
Choosing death over life4 total reviews
Comment from Sam Morrison
I thought this was the most unique of all of the stories. It was well written, save a spelling error (diarrhea), and possible grammatical errors with some capitalized words that did not seem to have a reason to be capitalized. It held my interest, though I will admit I choose lighter stories.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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I thought this was the most unique of all of the stories. It was well written, save a spelling error (diarrhea), and possible grammatical errors with some capitalized words that did not seem to have a reason to be capitalized. It held my interest, though I will admit I choose lighter stories.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Sam.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I think I would pick to go out with a bit of dignity, too.
However, I would not go climbing. I would go to Disneyland in a wheelchair and go to the front of the line with whoever I had roped into going with me. I would binge-watch old movies at a rerun movie house and stuff myself with popcorn and real Coca-Cola. I would eat out at a fancy smanchy eatery and order something I had never had, like snails. I would attempt one more go at making love if I could tempt anyone with this raggedy body. I would love life in all it's wonders until the very end. Karen
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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I think I would pick to go out with a bit of dignity, too.
However, I would not go climbing. I would go to Disneyland in a wheelchair and go to the front of the line with whoever I had roped into going with me. I would binge-watch old movies at a rerun movie house and stuff myself with popcorn and real Coca-Cola. I would eat out at a fancy smanchy eatery and order something I had never had, like snails. I would attempt one more go at making love if I could tempt anyone with this raggedy body. I would love life in all it's wonders until the very end. Karen
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Nice images, Karen. Thanks.
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Thanks for appreciating my ramblings! Karen
Comment from Douglas Goff
Interesting! And I liked the ending finale shout-out to Frank Sinatra.
Cancer is a scourge upon the earth. I believe they have the cure but can not close down the financial monster they have created.
Enjoyable read.
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Interesting! And I liked the ending finale shout-out to Frank Sinatra.
Cancer is a scourge upon the earth. I believe they have the cure but can not close down the financial monster they have created.
Enjoyable read.
D
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Douglas.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is wonderful writing in which I found myself completely immersed! Firstly, I like the way you have structured this into two parts: a compellingly argued first part when you describe the "multi-cell annihilation" of chemo and radiotherapy. A superb second to last line there. Followed by the choice or vote (in line with the prompt), the hesitation and then the climax of the piece where you propel yourself into the void. Your story is faultlessly written, raw and visceral. A remarkable read! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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This is wonderful writing in which I found myself completely immersed! Firstly, I like the way you have structured this into two parts: a compellingly argued first part when you describe the "multi-cell annihilation" of chemo and radiotherapy. A superb second to last line there. Followed by the choice or vote (in line with the prompt), the hesitation and then the climax of the piece where you propel yourself into the void. Your story is faultlessly written, raw and visceral. A remarkable read! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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From you, Debbie, that is praise indeed. I?m so pleased you liked it. Cheers.
