Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
A touching post full of regret and the yearn to change things here, a fine presentation and a memory of the old Beatles song too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
Thank you! Many times when I write silly, serious wins. So I wrote serious and will see if silly wins!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
Thank you! Many times when I write silly, serious wins. So I wrote serious and will see if silly wins!
Comment from
jessizero
This was a great piece of flash fiction in just two hundred words. I love that the main character decided to give life and love another chance. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
Thank you. I strive for variety each time I write, but I want my stories to cause readers to think, also.