And We Did
We travel life together.6 total reviews
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed this Free Verse. Your sweet story of a long friendship that grew into a lasting love. These few words says so much about the power of
love. May you enjoy many more years together.
Nancy
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
I enjoyed this Free Verse. Your sweet story of a long friendship that grew into a lasting love. These few words says so much about the power of
love. May you enjoy many more years together.
Nancy
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your read and your feedback. Appreciated.
Comment from zanya
What a wonderful story of life portrayed in this short Free Verse Poem - what better life trajectory could there be than sharing the journey with a special one?
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
What a wonderful story of life portrayed in this short Free Verse Poem - what better life trajectory could there be than sharing the journey with a special one?
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback.
Comment from jessizero
This poem was sweet, romantic, and lovely. I loved the last line, "And we did." It is the perfect ending to the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
This poem was sweet, romantic, and lovely. I loved the last line, "And we did." It is the perfect ending to the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thanks for the read. So please you enjoyed it.
Comment from Mark Jackson
That is really good. The problem is I am reading all the entries for the free verse competition and they are all so good except one. I am afraid, I am going to have to vote for that one. Otherwise, I might not get a vote at all. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
That is really good. The problem is I am reading all the entries for the free verse competition and they are all so good except one. I am afraid, I am going to have to vote for that one. Otherwise, I might not get a vote at all. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thanks for the read and feedback. I owe you a nomination for meaningful feedback. I will do it now.
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your free verse poem.
Long lasting love like that is a beautiful thing and not many find it.
Nicely written and presented.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your free verse poem.
Long lasting love like that is a beautiful thing and not many find it.
Nicely written and presented.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thanks for your read and your feedback. Appreciated.
Comment from Sallyo
Rating upgraded after edit.
Charming and heart warming, a story of an enduring romance. The only change I suggest is...
I'd liked that"
to
I'd like that"
to get the tenses right.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
Rating upgraded after edit.
Charming and heart warming, a story of an enduring romance. The only change I suggest is...
I'd liked that"
to
I'd like that"
to get the tenses right.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thanks for the catch. I will edit.