Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

And here you go with another fabulous poem. Your poetry makes me see things that I wouldn't ordinarily see and feel thing I wouldn't feel. Such a gift you have. Gretchen

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024

I am happy you can feel and visualize my haiku, that is what haiku is about.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Wouldn't it be wonderful to swing from the Big Dipper and watch the world go by. I think that would be wonderful. Impossible, but wonderful. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

swing on a star. . . cool haiku of freedom. . .
nice imagery and smooth flow and good satori

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 11-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Beautifully presented. Your words are poetic and holds to a Haiku of this kind. As always, the colors are fresh and a little dreamy. Nice reference to the Big Dipper.
RJ

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

On summer nights that are clear, we can see the stars. I like this expression of "my swing hangs from the Big Dipper." It shows that the narrator's dreams are hung on the stars, limitless.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024

Thank you very much, Big Sister.

love,

marival

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Exceptional

This is an excellent haiku poem, full of imagery and movement. And a few words you have told a whole story. The way this is presented and the images work well to support your words. This causes a rated to imagine.

Best wishes,

Alexan

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate the exceptional six stars review :)

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Cute. This makes me want to grab my space helmet and get to those stars.

I needed a break from my thoughts and this did the trick. You are MAGIC.

This stylish short price helped calm my racing mind. Thank you.
D

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024

Douglas, it's so good to hear from you, it makes me happy.
I like to be MAGIC lol Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

besitos y abrazos
MariVal