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Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "Ambivalence".
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Comment from GWHARGIS
Whoa! This should be called the survivors poem. I love the line "our memories ... swept under times carpet." That was such a powerful image. This was awesome. Gretchen
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Whoa! This should be called the survivors poem. I love the line "our memories ... swept under times carpet." That was such a powerful image. This was awesome. Gretchen
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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thank you very much, Gretchen, your review means a lot to me.
gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Why would somebody not read your beautiful poetry? We are all blessed by reading it. A love lost is devastating. I think most of us have been there. Your poem does a wonderful job describing that pain. Once again, a perfect presentation.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Why would somebody not read your beautiful poetry? We are all blessed by reading it. A love lost is devastating. I think most of us have been there. Your poem does a wonderful job describing that pain. Once again, a perfect presentation.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
a really nice hope-filled poem of being a survivor
nice imagery and smooth flow throughout...
like the light blue and the butterflies between each stanza - feels like flying free..
nice.
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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a really nice hope-filled poem of being a survivor
nice imagery and smooth flow throughout...
like the light blue and the butterflies between each stanza - feels like flying free..
nice.
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
Ambivalence is never a nice feeling to experience from someone you love. Unfortunately, I have been there before, but by far, I have seen more women than men be the recipients of this.
You words are touching and stricks a deep note.
RJ
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Ambivalence is never a nice feeling to experience from someone you love. Unfortunately, I have been there before, but by far, I have seen more women than men be the recipients of this.
You words are touching and stricks a deep note.
RJ
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
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You?re welcome
Comment from lyenochka
I'm so thankful that you are still here! How would I meet you? And your life is so much more valuable to the many of us who love you. But now you are stronger and can compassionately help those who are hurting because of giving their devotion to one who didn't deserve it!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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I'm so thankful that you are still here! How would I meet you? And your life is so much more valuable to the many of us who love you. But now you are stronger and can compassionately help those who are hurting because of giving their devotion to one who didn't deserve it!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Helen, your review touched me deeply... I cry a little. You are such a loving and kind person, I am very grateful you are in my life.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, Big Sister.
love you
MariVal
Comment from patcelaw
This is red written and is presented beautifully. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a very good week. May God bless. Patricia .
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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This is red written and is presented beautifully. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a very good week. May God bless. Patricia .
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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thank you, Patricia.
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Comment from royowen
Oh yes, I think our minds can muddle and think that somebody we desire, but in reality with bring us to our knees, our desires lie to us, which is covered in Jeremiah 17:9, "Our hearts are deceitful...."well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Oh yes, I think our minds can muddle and think that somebody we desire, but in reality with bring us to our knees, our desires lie to us, which is covered in Jeremiah 17:9, "Our hearts are deceitful...."well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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thank you, Roy.
gypsy hugs
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