Somewhere in Paris
Inspired by Rodin as inspired by Dante4 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a passionate embrace here, did this take place in Paris? You were inspired by this sculpture and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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This sounds like a passionate embrace here, did this take place in Paris? You were inspired by this sculpture and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I enjoyed your poem that I am an artist and a writer. In words match perfectly with the famous statue. You use good imagery and vivid descriptions. There is also much emotion in your poem. Thank you for sharing it.
Best wishes
Alex
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I enjoyed your poem that I am an artist and a writer. In words match perfectly with the famous statue. You use good imagery and vivid descriptions. There is also much emotion in your poem. Thank you for sharing it.
Best wishes
Alex
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Somewhere in Paris, has the proper formatting and reminds me of Keats' observations of the stilled romance on a Grecian urn.
"Beauty is truth, truth beauty,--that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know."
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This free verse, Somewhere in Paris, has the proper formatting and reminds me of Keats' observations of the stilled romance on a Grecian urn.
"Beauty is truth, truth beauty,--that is all
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know."
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
Comment from Mark Jackson
That is good really good. Sorry to say this but I am sorry you put the picture on this. I find it has taken away my opportunity to create my own picture. This site loves pictures so we all use them and usually, they help a little sometimes a lot. This time I feel my imagination has been stifled. The words get 5 stars.
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That is good really good. Sorry to say this but I am sorry you put the picture on this. I find it has taken away my opportunity to create my own picture. This site loves pictures so we all use them and usually, they help a little sometimes a lot. This time I feel my imagination has been stifled. The words get 5 stars.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
