2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from kahpot
I really like the way you have used/described all the senses, (thank you for the notes) it does take the reader on a journey, so very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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I really like the way you have used/described all the senses, (thank you for the notes) it does take the reader on a journey, so very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
Oh my goodness. This was just beautiful. It was a description of a deep love. The kind that lasts through the ages. The moments were like small painting, done with rich colors and fine details. Another stunner. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Oh my goodness. This was just beautiful. It was a description of a deep love. The kind that lasts through the ages. The moments were like small painting, done with rich colors and fine details. Another stunner. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen, it's always good to hear from you.
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Comment from RJ Heritage
Sensible and sensitive poem, that explores the passions of man. I like your words and the colors that you chose to express such deep felt emotions. The imagery is classical and fresh and sends the eye from the fore to the back. This is clever, and it compliments the far reaching emotions of two people in a journey of love.
RJ
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Sensible and sensitive poem, that explores the passions of man. I like your words and the colors that you chose to express such deep felt emotions. The imagery is classical and fresh and sends the eye from the fore to the back. This is clever, and it compliments the far reaching emotions of two people in a journey of love.
RJ
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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It's about a woman's passion.
Thank you very much, rj
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with high sensory appeal. I could hear and feel the spring winds and smell the lavender fields. When it comes to peaches, there's nothing like the real thing. Your poem reads and flows well, and your message of love is clear. Well chosen photo. A pleasure to read. Xo. M
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with high sensory appeal. I could hear and feel the spring winds and smell the lavender fields. When it comes to peaches, there's nothing like the real thing. Your poem reads and flows well, and your message of love is clear. Well chosen photo. A pleasure to read. Xo. M
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
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Comment from shelley kaye
ooh cool path through the trees picture!
excellent sense poem -
great imagery with a cool breeze, calming lavender, and juicy fruit
nice and relaxing read
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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ooh cool path through the trees picture!
excellent sense poem -
great imagery with a cool breeze, calming lavender, and juicy fruit
nice and relaxing read
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Oh and you do have a way of words. In the words of Carly Simon, "Nobody does it better." You can tell a story and make the senses scream pleasure and delight. The fragrance of the trees, the succulent plants, the bites of the fruit, you make it all look and feel so romantic. I am always amazed by your free verse and once again your presentation is splendid and genius. Thank you for delighting me in the beauty of your talent once again. Virtual six. I used all mine up by Monday morning. Love, Debi
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Oh and you do have a way of words. In the words of Carly Simon, "Nobody does it better." You can tell a story and make the senses scream pleasure and delight. The fragrance of the trees, the succulent plants, the bites of the fruit, you make it all look and feel so romantic. I am always amazed by your free verse and once again your presentation is splendid and genius. Thank you for delighting me in the beauty of your talent once again. Virtual six. I used all mine up by Monday morning. Love, Debi
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Love
Marival
Comment from lyenochka
You're such a expert in using senses in all your poems. This one even includes the sense of taste of peaches to add to the full sensual experience of being with the loved one.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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You're such a expert in using senses in all your poems. This one even includes the sense of taste of peaches to add to the full sensual experience of being with the loved one.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you, big sister. I'm happy you like it. I hope your week is going well.
Love
Marival
Comment from barbara.wilkey
There are many senses discussed in this poem. I'm writing a novel right now and this poem really encompasses what I'm trying to get my heroin to feel. She's fighting me some. LOL She has scars from two men in her life and she's scared. I'm worried I'm not portraying it correctly. It's still a work in progress. Thank you for sharing. I may come back to this poem a few times.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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There are many senses discussed in this poem. I'm writing a novel right now and this poem really encompasses what I'm trying to get my heroin to feel. She's fighting me some. LOL She has scars from two men in her life and she's scared. I'm worried I'm not portraying it correctly. It's still a work in progress. Thank you for sharing. I may come back to this poem a few times.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Your heroin is fighting you? Oh boy. I'm curious to find out what happens.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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They normally win, but I don't want to take this novel where she wants to. I'll let you know.