2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Summer Nights".
7 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm wondering if those stars are trembling with passion. In my imagination they are, just saying. Thank you for sharing this gorgeous presentation with us. We are so blessed that you do.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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I'm wondering if those stars are trembling with passion. In my imagination they are, just saying. Thank you for sharing this gorgeous presentation with us. We are so blessed that you do.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
totally cool imagery
stars, wind, flowers, flies -
but what about the heat? lol
nice free verse couplet poem with smooth flow of imagistic words
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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totally cool imagery
stars, wind, flowers, flies -
but what about the heat? lol
nice free verse couplet poem with smooth flow of imagistic words
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful words once again. That are complimented by the vibid color scheme.
Thanks for sharing.
Hope you have a wonderful day and be Inspired even more.
RJ
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Beautiful words once again. That are complimented by the vibid color scheme.
Thanks for sharing.
Hope you have a wonderful day and be Inspired even more.
RJ
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
That picture shows us a scene from far away, and it makes us feel like we are a real voyeur in their world.
From the picture, I get the idea that that the sky could all of a sudden be full of Flying pigs and they would bot notice. Nice work. Karen
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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That picture shows us a scene from far away, and it makes us feel like we are a real voyeur in their world.
From the picture, I get the idea that that the sky could all of a sudden be full of Flying pigs and they would bot notice. Nice work. Karen
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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:-)
Comment from kahpot
Love in the midst of everything nature has to offer, how beautiful, your descriptions of how people and nature can find peace together is wonderful, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Love in the midst of everything nature has to offer, how beautiful, your descriptions of how people and nature can find peace together is wonderful, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
It sounds like a night full of romance. I like how you invoke the sense of touch (wind tousled her hair) and smell (flowers) and sight (stars) and hearing (flies buzzing).
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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It sounds like a night full of romance. I like how you invoke the sense of touch (wind tousled her hair) and smell (flowers) and sight (stars) and hearing (flies buzzing).
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you are having a great evening.
Love
Marival
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with vivid imagery. I could see the whole scene from the night sky to the flies buzzing here and there. Beautiful photo and presentation. Well done. Xo. M
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with vivid imagery. I could see the whole scene from the night sky to the flies buzzing here and there. Beautiful photo and presentation. Well done. Xo. M
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs