Breathless
Naani5 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
A graphic description of that desperate shortage of breath one experiences with pneumonia. I'm just coming out of a bout of Covid, so find it easy to identify with!
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A graphic description of that desperate shortage of breath one experiences with pneumonia. I'm just coming out of a bout of Covid, so find it easy to identify with!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
How awful to be breathless and my daughter suffers with asthma and it is always worrying when she has an attack and needs her inhaler. A poignant post for the contest, love Dolly x
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How awful to be breathless and my daughter suffers with asthma and it is always worrying when she has an attack and needs her inhaler. A poignant post for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is an entry into the Naani poem contest that took the reader in more than one direction. A blocked airway - from what and what happens next. An asthmatic person who suffers an attack - where were they when it happened. Sickness - what kind? So many questions from only 24 syllables. Well done and best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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This is an entry into the Naani poem contest that took the reader in more than one direction. A blocked airway - from what and what happens next. An asthmatic person who suffers an attack - where were they when it happened. Sickness - what kind? So many questions from only 24 syllables. Well done and best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thanks for your review. The answer to those questions is provided in the author's notes
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, indeed, it's very bad if one is born to an asthmatic infection, because it can be very distressing in certain weather conditions, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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Oh yes, indeed, it's very bad if one is born to an asthmatic infection, because it can be very distressing in certain weather conditions, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Naani poetry writing prompt. This is sort of Deja Vu for me. I was diagnosed with pneumonia yesterday and I knew that poem rang a bell. Lol. Good artwork to go with it. I wish I had read this yesterday. You could've saved me a trip to the dr. ;-) good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the Naani poetry writing prompt. This is sort of Deja Vu for me. I was diagnosed with pneumonia yesterday and I knew that poem rang a bell. Lol. Good artwork to go with it. I wish I had read this yesterday. You could've saved me a trip to the dr. ;-) good luck in the contest
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thanks for your review and sorry for the diagnosis. I had breathing problems for a few days and still have the annoying cough after 3 weeks. Hope you recover quickly. Rest up.