My teddy bear
Senryu you!4 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Ah-h isn't that just so cute - a link to the past and childhood - still going strong though maybe 'in stitches'- double entendre = and such a great pic to illustrate
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Ah-h isn't that just so cute - a link to the past and childhood - still going strong though maybe 'in stitches'- double entendre = and such a great pic to illustrate
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a cute poem and picture and reminds us how loved childhood toys are never forgotten. This is a groaner of a pun with stitches as in sewn and in supplying laughs and fun.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Enjoy the rest of the day.
Joan
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Hi
This is a cute poem and picture and reminds us how loved childhood toys are never forgotten. This is a groaner of a pun with stitches as in sewn and in supplying laughs and fun.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Enjoy the rest of the day.
Joan
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Oh I love this Senryu 5-7-5 poem. Charming and sweet. The artwork adds a lot to the poem's presentation. FYI: don't forget to give credit to the artist or the site that the art came from to protect copyrights. Nicely done. Good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Oh I love this Senryu 5-7-5 poem. Charming and sweet. The artwork adds a lot to the poem's presentation. FYI: don't forget to give credit to the artist or the site that the art came from to protect copyrights. Nicely done. Good luck.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you dear Marilyn <3
Comment from jessizero
This senryu was so sweet! I like that you still have your childhood best friend (bear) in stitches. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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This senryu was so sweet! I like that you still have your childhood best friend (bear) in stitches. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you dear jessi <3
