Mary Takes A Walk
On a bright sunny day...5 total reviews
Comment from LoAnn Beery
What a sweet, dear, poem. I could imagine reading it to my grands. I immediately liked it because of her adorable name. She had many adventures and I am sure a child would like it
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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What a sweet, dear, poem. I could imagine reading it to my grands. I immediately liked it because of her adorable name. She had many adventures and I am sure a child would like it
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you, that means a lot to me. :)
Comment from ~Dovey
Hello Poet!
Thank you for sharing the story of Mary May Mathilda Ray - nice job with alliteration and rhyme. This is a cute children's poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Kim
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Hello Poet!
Thank you for sharing the story of Mary May Mathilda Ray - nice job with alliteration and rhyme. This is a cute children's poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Kim
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much, l appreciate this nice review. :)
Comment from s.m.kirby
This is a wonderful childrens poem. I enjoyed the rhyming of it. Yes there is a lot a child can explore in their own back yard. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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This is a wonderful childrens poem. I enjoyed the rhyming of it. Yes there is a lot a child can explore in their own back yard. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you for this exceptional review...it means a lot to me. :)
Comment from Nathan Allen
A charming children's poem about a young girl's exploration of her backyard.
The poem paints a vivid picture of Mary's day, from her picnic lunch under a tree to her encounters with various animals like robins, squirrels, and bunnies. The repetition of Mary's full name adds a touch of whimsy and helps to make the poem memorable for young listeners.
it effectively captures the simple joys of childhood exploration and discovery. It celebrates the wonder and beauty of the natural world, even within the confines of a backyard.A delightful and heartwarming poem that is sure to please young children.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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A charming children's poem about a young girl's exploration of her backyard.
The poem paints a vivid picture of Mary's day, from her picnic lunch under a tree to her encounters with various animals like robins, squirrels, and bunnies. The repetition of Mary's full name adds a touch of whimsy and helps to make the poem memorable for young listeners.
it effectively captures the simple joys of childhood exploration and discovery. It celebrates the wonder and beauty of the natural world, even within the confines of a backyard.A delightful and heartwarming poem that is sure to please young children.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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What a wonderful, insightful review! Thank you. :)
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed the adventures of Mary May Matilda Ray! Her encounters with many animals was wonderful. I also admire your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed the adventures of Mary May Matilda Ray! Her encounters with many animals was wonderful. I also admire your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm always grateful for your reviews. :)