2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Now, what a minute, my dear, we're just getting a good start on spring. Although autumn is my favorite season. I enjoyed reading this club entry and the entire presentation.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Now, what a minute, my dear, we're just getting a good start on spring. Although autumn is my favorite season. I enjoyed reading this club entry and the entire presentation.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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(*-*) With Japanese poetry, it's normal to cover all seasons depending on what you want to portray. I love autumn too. Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem
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Comment from shelley kaye
ooh nice imagery in this - never thought of bending trees that way before... nice.
smooth flow of words and cool colours and pics
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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ooh nice imagery in this - never thought of bending trees that way before... nice.
smooth flow of words and cool colours and pics
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, Shelley
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Comment from GWHARGIS
I got the feeling that the pampas grass wasn't the only thing shaking. Lol. It did sound like a beautiful backdrop for a proposal. You are undoubtedly the queen of the emotional haiku. Gretchen
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I got the feeling that the pampas grass wasn't the only thing shaking. Lol. It did sound like a beautiful backdrop for a proposal. You are undoubtedly the queen of the emotional haiku. Gretchen
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem, Gretchen
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with good imagery. I can see the whole scene. Of special note:
by the pampas grass--
shadow wavers
(Nice)
Beautiful presentation and graphics. Well done. Xo. M
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with good imagery. I can see the whole scene. Of special note:
by the pampas grass--
shadow wavers
(Nice)
Beautiful presentation and graphics. Well done. Xo. M
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
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Comment from RJ Heritage
Charming and touching. Seems to tell the story of hopeful love that might be rewarded.Thank you for sharing.
Have a good night and wonderful morning.
RJ
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Charming and touching. Seems to tell the story of hopeful love that might be rewarded.Thank you for sharing.
Have a good night and wonderful morning.
RJ
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem
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You're welcome
Comment from CornishChick
Ok, you got me on this one. I had to read it two, three, four times. There's depth in each line. Sort of reminds me of Emily Dickenson - her poetry drove me nuts, but has stuck with me for years! This one, though sparse on words, is DEEP on thought and I like the challenge of it.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Ok, you got me on this one. I had to read it two, three, four times. There's depth in each line. Sort of reminds me of Emily Dickenson - her poetry drove me nuts, but has stuck with me for years! This one, though sparse on words, is DEEP on thought and I like the challenge of it.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Yes, haiku is supposed to reflect emotion and deep thoughts... enlightenment
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. A man proposes to his girlfriend but she is undecided between yes or no... the reflection in nature, the shadow the man proposes and the girlfriend is undecided.... wavering
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Comment from royowen
What a clever post you've made here Gypsy, with that shadow wavering suggest that it's not the only thing that's wavering in this proposal, this is an excellent post dear girl, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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What a clever post you've made here Gypsy, with that shadow wavering suggest that it's not the only thing that's wavering in this proposal, this is an excellent post dear girl, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem
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Most welcome