I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 207 "Hallucinations "Thoughts from the dark side
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Comment from Mark Jackson
I like this, it feels urgent, energetic and youthful. Often it takes a rhyme to get a poem to flow, This does not rhyme but the short line has the reader racing along at breakneck speed. I really like this.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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I like this, it feels urgent, energetic and youthful. Often it takes a rhyme to get a poem to flow, This does not rhyme but the short line has the reader racing along at breakneck speed. I really like this.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Hey thanks. I?ve written rhymes but I do like the feeling of freedom when I tell my story in free verse.
Comment from Claire Tennant
A window of the mind has been opened in this beautiful poem. You educate, explain and comfort in this poem Wisely and cleverly done
In the second line, you may have wanted to repeat Say It, but I read Ssy It. You might want to alter it. Otherwise, there is no need to change anything. Well done
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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A window of the mind has been opened in this beautiful poem. You educate, explain and comfort in this poem Wisely and cleverly done
In the second line, you may have wanted to repeat Say It, but I read Ssy It. You might want to alter it. Otherwise, there is no need to change anything. Well done
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thanks Claire
